tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post4724449478753003219..comments2024-03-09T00:24:14.856-05:00Comments on Crystal Collier: Young Adult Author: 1st KissCrystal Collierhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03912469552483168148noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-27012419403151640312012-07-11T11:27:13.275-04:002012-07-11T11:27:13.275-04:00I'm stopping by to give you an award on my blo...I'm stopping by to give you an award on my blog today, too :) This scene was tingly! And I want to know what all the backstory is here! Great job!Hope Robersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877380868985454894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-21640895610937414132012-06-27T17:00:00.978-04:002012-06-27T17:00:00.978-04:00Pretty hot and steamy.
I stopped by to give you a...Pretty hot and steamy.<br /><br />I stopped by to give you an AWARD. It's at my blog for you. Stop by and check it out.farawayeyeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17578277501054242356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-44779780288681134662012-06-20T13:58:53.697-04:002012-06-20T13:58:53.697-04:00Great job - I remember that shot of adrenaline onl...Great job - I remember that shot of adrenaline only too well - I think you described it really well.Claire Hennessyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16576410137759875223noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-22923979051209859752012-06-17T15:43:48.334-04:002012-06-17T15:43:48.334-04:00Oh, the mystery... while everyone else hit the nai...Oh, the mystery... while everyone else hit the nail on the head with pointing out the perfect balance of supernatural and realism, I must point out how unfair it is to leave us all hanging in suspense! So... the story continues when? :-)Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17997742235984864574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-90203459818922902632012-06-17T15:02:41.736-04:002012-06-17T15:02:41.736-04:00Great excerpt! I like the description. :)
(And I...Great excerpt! I like the description. :) <br /><br />(And I wonder why she's nervous about her parents.)Golden Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-61666239546948022702012-06-17T08:28:13.743-04:002012-06-17T08:28:13.743-04:00that was a touching scene! dreamy! great job with ...that was a touching scene! dreamy! great job with the fest!Tara Tylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07587802105993889515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-79000636822034910042012-06-16T14:31:12.988-04:002012-06-16T14:31:12.988-04:00Kyra, Angeline, L.G., M.J., Heather, and Danielle,...Kyra, Angeline, L.G., M.J., Heather, and Danielle, thanks.<br /><br />Aldrea--I know, right?<br /><br />Andrea--The almost heat... =)Crystal Collierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03912469552483168148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-2608432525981418652012-06-15T23:38:12.983-04:002012-06-15T23:38:12.983-04:00Oh, great scene!! i like the extra heat in the kis...Oh, great scene!! i like the extra heat in the kiss too, hehe.<br /><br />:)<br /><br />AndreaAndrea Teaganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02050710871603076745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-81354679730763552502012-06-15T19:10:13.487-04:002012-06-15T19:10:13.487-04:00Sweet and wonderfully done.
Just don't fry hi...Sweet and wonderfully done.<br /><br />Just don't fry him, girl.Aldrea Alienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05652344290376563676noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-84354468507607432452012-06-15T12:31:37.061-04:002012-06-15T12:31:37.061-04:00you described it wonderfully!
Nutschell
www.thewr...you described it wonderfully!<br /><br />Nutschell<br />www.thewritingnut.comnutschellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10967710710805174781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-70149916276597915592012-06-15T11:34:59.142-04:002012-06-15T11:34:59.142-04:00They nailed it in the other comments. The kiss was...They nailed it in the other comments. The kiss was great and I really want to know what she can do!Danihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11026644605799767199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-55926987457328670122012-06-14T20:58:30.405-04:002012-06-14T20:58:30.405-04:00This is a great scene. I agree with L.G. that it ...This is a great scene. I agree with L.G. that it was a perfect combinationHeather Murphyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11847855601653718033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-22920682138360893352012-06-14T17:32:08.993-04:002012-06-14T17:32:08.993-04:00Love this line:
An explosion burst through my che...Love this line:<br /><br />An explosion burst through my chest—warm and real, but thankfully not in the flame variety.<br /><br />Great scene!M.J. Fifieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15626475963328519693noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-12306421169504216302012-06-14T11:24:32.928-04:002012-06-14T11:24:32.928-04:00I also enjoyed the mix between the fantastic and t...I also enjoyed the mix between the fantastic and the feelings that we can all relate to. Great scene!L.G. Keltnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07624902347418621283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-57967952461416646222012-06-14T11:09:58.284-04:002012-06-14T11:09:58.284-04:00I agree with Kyra; even though the specifics are f...I agree with Kyra; even though the specifics are fantastical, we've all felt that scary surge and wondered what it was. Great piece.Spanjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13893837904669368614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-6886875179480069332012-06-14T09:11:42.009-04:002012-06-14T09:11:42.009-04:00Excellent scene! I like how she stopped to ask her...Excellent scene! I like how she stopped to ask herself if that was how it feels to be in love - I think we've all been there! :DKyra Lennonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13853462182450429660noreply@blogger.com