tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post260194248389757783..comments2024-03-09T00:24:14.856-05:00Comments on Crystal Collier: Young Adult Author: Campaigner's Challenge Flash FictionCrystal Collierhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03912469552483168148noreply@blogger.comBlogger43125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-75083119560915501922011-09-12T17:39:04.842-04:002011-09-12T17:39:04.842-04:00Lol! I thought something terrifying was coming for...Lol! I thought something terrifying was coming for her! I love the ending. Though, Mrs. Butz is pretty terrifying. ;)Amanda Milnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07582468814920761586noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-61439432757026418882011-09-12T14:49:42.353-04:002011-09-12T14:49:42.353-04:00I'd definitely be in a bunch if I was about to...I'd definitely be in a bunch if I was about to become Mrs. Butz. Hope she doesn't regret the decision to surrender. Enjoyed the laugh.cleemckenziehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15456109243453726483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-5698110580437874432011-09-11T20:57:36.277-04:002011-09-11T20:57:36.277-04:00Hello again! So I love your little "I beleive...Hello again! So I love your little "I beleive" button! Where did you find it, cus i want one too! :)Rachel Beanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02558300529910254645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-22674481961373649672011-09-11T20:28:24.429-04:002011-09-11T20:28:24.429-04:00Haha, wow, definitely wasn't expecting that en...Haha, wow, definitely wasn't expecting that ending! Great job! Haha, the really weird thing though is that I actually had a a teacher named Mrs. Butz, no kidding!Rachel Beanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02558300529910254645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-3394380533036645712011-09-11T10:58:17.816-04:002011-09-11T10:58:17.816-04:00Very fun!Very fun!Alica McKenna Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12159703224812368401noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-86347946741995417282011-09-11T10:40:45.657-04:002011-09-11T10:40:45.657-04:00NOT the ending I expected but I loved it. Nice wo...NOT the ending I expected but I loved it. Nice work!Lyndanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-88171051584698497872011-09-10T17:03:12.206-04:002011-09-10T17:03:12.206-04:00Seriously, I was all sorts of wide-eyed at the tum...Seriously, I was all sorts of wide-eyed at the tumbled lamp scene (I really enjoyed that visual, by the way.) and laughing at the end. The way you built up then slowly eased the tension is admirable.Leahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06183280753729590166noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-45297711102067283922011-09-10T12:41:31.192-04:002011-09-10T12:41:31.192-04:00You had me nervous at first and laughing at the en...You had me nervous at first and laughing at the end. Great job! :)Katie Dodgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17554091817717890150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-6870997367918593662011-09-09T22:31:33.831-04:002011-09-09T22:31:33.831-04:00Ahh Cheryl, the Florida cheese lady that's wil...Ahh Cheryl, the Florida cheese lady that's willing to give her bride the name of Mrs. Butz. Gotta love it, and I do, so here's The Versatile Blogger Award. You can check out this link for more info: http://aneclecticmuse.blogspot.com/2011/09/and-winner-is.htmlBarbara V. Evershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07350675979426950166noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-7614420624055534932011-09-09T21:14:02.610-04:002011-09-09T21:14:02.610-04:00Loved the ending! It was worth your week of agoni...Loved the ending! It was worth your week of agonizing :)Susanna Leonard Hillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17655630528649780363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-57916849975198420272011-09-09T18:58:08.501-04:002011-09-09T18:58:08.501-04:00Oh, wonderful! I wish I could write a fun piece.Oh, wonderful! I wish I could write a fun piece.Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-23026587224998617352011-09-09T17:55:36.057-04:002011-09-09T17:55:36.057-04:00That was awesome! Totally didn't see the dress...That was awesome! Totally didn't see the dress coming ^_^ Good job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-74886410544410246122011-09-09T14:14:40.639-04:002011-09-09T14:14:40.639-04:00Carol, blogger must be having trauma. =( Sorry.Carol, blogger must be having trauma. =( Sorry.Crystal Collierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03912469552483168148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-41681515103776501572011-09-09T14:00:16.903-04:002011-09-09T14:00:16.903-04:00Hey, I know I commented on this post. Well, I'...Hey, I know I commented on this post. Well, I'll try again. Nice story, and great twist at the end! Totally unexpected. :)Carol Riggshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14092209912983783974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-83441805388758809142011-09-09T13:31:25.012-04:002011-09-09T13:31:25.012-04:00Fun! Loved the twist. I happen to know a couple of...Fun! Loved the twist. I happen to know a couple of Mrs. Butts' too. We don't talk about the last name ;)Briannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11581532070734685757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-62711838767004906862011-09-09T11:40:09.058-04:002011-09-09T11:40:09.058-04:00Wow Crystal, congratulations on being shortlisted ...Wow Crystal, congratulations on being shortlisted out of so many. Well deserved :)Claire Hennessyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16576410137759875223noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-72227811958062894552011-09-09T11:04:05.345-04:002011-09-09T11:04:05.345-04:00I love your spin on this! Super fun read - and gre...I love your spin on this! Super fun read - and great job with 200 words! Mrs. Butz...well, she can always keep her maiden name! :)Erin L. Schneiderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13724907482299321322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-19575725423205525912011-09-09T10:43:52.877-04:002011-09-09T10:43:52.877-04:00Eek! Me? *pointing to self* Yippy!Eek! Me? *pointing to self* Yippy!Crystal Collierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03912469552483168148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-65924441197104352862011-09-09T10:12:17.114-04:002011-09-09T10:12:17.114-04:00I’m one of the judges for the first challenge and ...I’m one of the judges for the first challenge and wanted to let you know you’ve been shortlisted as one of the Top 5 to move onto Stage Two. After this comes Stage Three (semi-final), then Stage Four (final). Good luck!Natasha Hanovahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16131760295282222691noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-9637277489652884932011-09-09T09:47:08.240-04:002011-09-09T09:47:08.240-04:00Butz.... Bahahahaha! Just tell me her future hubby...Butz.... Bahahahaha! Just tell me her future hubby's name isn't Seymour!! I totally loved it. :-)Crystalhttp://littlebundleofcontradictions.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-64874370085997557902011-09-09T00:53:29.002-04:002011-09-09T00:53:29.002-04:00Mrs. Butz would give me pause too. Nice story. Min...Mrs. Butz would give me pause too. Nice story. Mine is #72 and also relates to a weddingbridgethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01553619856059414447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-73987932184239820142011-09-08T22:32:03.469-04:002011-09-08T22:32:03.469-04:00Nicely done, Crystal :)Nicely done, Crystal :)Len Lamberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13394563639136301725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-63674096622697363292011-09-08T20:00:00.748-04:002011-09-08T20:00:00.748-04:00I loved the wedding twist. Great job!I loved the wedding twist. Great job!kjmckendryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07534751311630921447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-11748634572380650072011-09-08T19:58:53.912-04:002011-09-08T19:58:53.912-04:00Ha, that was great.Ha, that was great.Lynda R Young as Elle Cardyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09975442291393246148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8568183101637683554.post-43803359964261814342011-09-08T19:12:18.880-04:002011-09-08T19:12:18.880-04:00I love the sudden shift in mood. Well done!I love the sudden shift in mood. Well done!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00769602845843608247noreply@blogger.com